Showing posts with label Evan. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Evan. Show all posts

Friday, 21 September 2012

The Year 3s have been writing diary entries based on the Princess from the story The Princess and the White Bear King.

Dear Diary
Today I climbed a gigantic mountain. My hands were broken and I thought they were going to drop off. I could feel I was going to let go, but I didn’t let go. I finally got to the top of the mountain.
Love Princess Xxxxx


By Katie V (Yr3) 


Dear Diary
It was the worst day of my life. I was climbing a glass mountain it was freezing. I saw the sun shining behind the mountain. My hands and knees were bruised. When I got to the top it was voiceless. I saw an enormous grey castle in front of me.
Princess xx


By Simeon (Yr3) 

Dear Diary
Today was a scary day because I had to climb a freezing, chilly, sharp mountain. When I got half way I didn’t want to look up or down. So I just looked at the rest of the mountain and said to myself I can do this.  Eventually I got to the top. Then I saw the great grey castle and my heart started to beat faster and faster.                                       
Princess      xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
By Katie H (Yr3)

Dear Diary

Today I had to do the hardest task ever! I climbed a massive mountain. If you had seen it you would be amazed.  I could hear birds squawking. I was tired and my hands were bloody. I was nearly there soon I came across a grey castle it was very gloomy.  

Princess   xxx
By Jessica (Yr3)


Dear Diary
Today I climbed up a glass mountain and my hands were so so so freezing.  I felt anxious about climbing the mountain and what the weather would be like. After I got to the top I saw the gloomy grey castle. My hands were bloody and my legs were aching.
Princess xxx
By Evan (Yr3)