106 Words - The Bin
Sarah has had a problem for two years with a bin. She thought there were monsters in there; today was her turn to put the rubbish out. She was terrified to do this but her mam said, “Go and put the rubbish out now!” Sarah replied, “I can’t!” Her mam forced her to go and do it. Slowly Sarah opened the door and crept up to the bin. She thought this was the end of her life. Sarah walked closer, then she heard thudding coming from the bin. She got even more scared. Her heart was pounding. “I am scared!” But when she lifted the lid…
By Dan Yr6
Sarah has had a problem for two years with a bin. She thought there were monsters in there; today was her turn to put the rubbish out. She was terrified to do this but her mam said, “Go and put the rubbish out now!” Sarah replied, “I can’t!” Her mam forced her to go and do it. Slowly Sarah opened the door and crept up to the bin. She thought this was the end of her life. Sarah walked closer, then she heard thudding coming from the bin. She got even more scared. Her heart was pounding. “I am scared!” But when she lifted the lid…
By Dan Yr6
Dan, this is great. I like your use of the words thudding and pounding.
ReplyDeleteWhat happens next Dan ?
ReplyDeleteGreat descriptions! I also want to know what happened when she lifted the lid!
ReplyDeleteGreat words and speech! what will happen next to Sarah?
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