Thumbelina
was the size of a baby’s thumb. She lived in London in the 1950s; where it
always rained. If you’ve guessed already what the ending is going to be then
you’re probably wrong! Thumbelina was walking down the street in her yellow
frock when, out of nowhere it started
raining and it made her pretty, yellow frock wet! Thumbelina was angry, as a monkey
when you have just stolen its bananas! Faster and faster, Thumbelina ran down the
street. She was going to her house to change her frock when she spotted a river
ahead, fell in and drowned.
By Cameron Yr6
Good story, Cameron. I wanted to know why she fell in the river. She sounded a bit stupid.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Cam
ReplyDeletethanks for all the coments
Deleteliked the story
DeleteI enjoyed writing my story.
ReplyDeletecam
Awesome story Cam. It wouldn't be nice to be Thumbelina
ReplyDeleteawesome story cam I really enjoyed it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading P.S new name for posts is minecraft van
Deletereally good story Cameron!
ReplyDeleteShe fell because the road was slippy
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your story Cameron.
ReplyDeletegreat story made me laugh
ReplyDeletekeep writing Cameron