Friday, 7 March 2014

100 Word Story - Thumbelina


Thumbelina was the size of a baby’s thumb. She lived in London in the 1950s; where it always rained. If you’ve guessed already what the ending is going to be then you’re probably wrong! Thumbelina was walking down the street in her yellow frock when, out of nowhere  it started raining and it made her pretty, yellow frock wet! Thumbelina was angry, as a monkey when you have just stolen its bananas! Faster and faster, Thumbelina ran down the street. She was going to her house to change her frock when she spotted a river ahead, fell in and drowned.
By Cameron Yr6

12 comments:

  1. Good story, Cameron. I wanted to know why she fell in the river. She sounded a bit stupid.

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  2. Well done, Cam

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  3. I enjoyed writing my story.
    cam

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  4. Awesome story Cam. It wouldn't be nice to be Thumbelina

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  5. awesome story cam I really enjoyed it :)

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    1. Thanks for reading P.S new name for posts is minecraft van

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  6. really good story Cameron!

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  7. She fell because the road was slippy

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  8. I enjoyed reading your story Cameron.

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  9. great story made me laugh
    keep writing Cameron

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