100 Words - The Rollercoaster
of Doom
The biggest roller coaster had just been built in the park. It was 50
metres tall and David was about to get 20 pounds to go on it. It went 100 mph.
He had handed his money over, but what people didn’t know was that he was
cursed for bad luck.
When he went on, the kart dropped from the 50 metres. Most broke their
necks and some died. David survived the drop. He said,
“Look up! Can you see the coaster track? It’s falling.” Sadly David died at the
age of 14. But now the curse was gone
forever.
By Jamie Yr 6
Jamie, I like your story because it is original. I've never read a story like this one! I wonder how David's family felt.
ReplyDeleteAwesome story Jamie! Was on the edge of my seat! Keep it up! :)
ReplyDeletemake more of these they're good!
ReplyDeleteYikes! This is like a movie I saw once - not very happy, but at least the curse is broken!
ReplyDeleteThis is an exciting, well-written 100wc - well done!
Mr K (Team 100wc)
:-)