In a little village
lived poor Jack Dust. He owned a cow that he sold for three magic seeds. The
same night he planted them; nothing happened until he woke up. There was a
giant beanstalk! While his mother was
asleep, Jack climbed and climbed it. Then
finally he made it to the top. There was a castle with a golden egg. Jack
needed the money, so he stole it. Little did he know that the giant was
tracking him down… He slid down the tall beanstalk. He made it to the bottom
and was squashed by the giant! Splat!
By Jackson Yr6
well done jackson great story
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Superb twist at the end, Jackson.
ReplyDeleteWell done Jackson, your modern twist on a traditional tale made my class laugh out loud! Keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteWhat a creative way to update a fairy tale, Jackson! I really love the use of onomatopoeia in this 100 word challenge and I also really like that you named him Jack Dust. Excellent writing!
ReplyDeleteNice story Jax, loved the bit where he got smushed by the giant
ReplyDeletecool story jackson
ReplyDeleteNice!
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