Friday, 14 March 2014

106 Words - Daisy!
When Daisy was 8 Years old, she was given a box by her grandma, but she told her she wasn’t to open the box till she was 68! 60 years passed by. Daisy was cleaning her closet out and she found the box, her grandma gave her. She remembered her gran saying, “Open the box in 60 years.” But when she lifted the lid Daisy was no longer a granny! She was a 10 year old girl again. The box must have made her young again! It didn’t take her back to the past like she thought. She was glad to be young; to live longer!

Linzi Yr 6
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  1. Ashfieldblog14 March 2014 at 21:38

    Great story, Linzi. I wonder how she would explain her new appearance to her friends.

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    1. Linzi Mckenzie18 March 2014 at 12:30

      Yes I wonder too! Its will take a long time to explain.

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  2. Anonymous16 March 2014 at 11:24

    Thanks Linzi- an imaginative idea, which you explain well. I was most interested to realise that Daisy was a grandma herself- and wondered whether she would also have passed the box on to her grand-daughter or son ?
    Mr Furlong Team 100-Norwich

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    1. Linzi Mckenzie18 March 2014 at 12:29

      No problem, thank you Mr Furlong! Yes Daisy was a grandma herself. Yes if I had more words I would write much more about more what will happen too Daisy! Thank you for looking ta my work! :)
      Linzi Ashfield

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