Friday, 14 March 2014

106 Words - The Box…

A small, innocent box arrived at Bella’s door this morning. It must be a birthday gift, she thought, since it was her birthday. Grabbing the mysterious box Bella dashed upstairs into her bedroom. On the box it was labelled ‘Do NOT Open’.  But Bella did not listen. She went ahead and opened it! She was so excited but when she lifted the lid… Nothing. Suddenly in the blink of an eye she was gone! Sucked into another world… Never to be returned. No one knows why... She should have read the label. If you ever receive a box like this, I beg you, read the label.

By Ellie F  Yr 6

2 comments:

  1. Hang on...I've just read a label like that...oh noooooooooooo... (Great story Ellie :-))

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  2. Amazing story Ellie! I love it so much! Keep up the good work!

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