Monday, 10 March 2014

Mountain Poem

I am the rocky beast,
When you climb me my body crumbles,
If you get to my pointy head,
It will look like you’re on top of the world.

I am the haunting menace,
When my body moves I make an avalanche,
My rocky arms crumble when I move,
I have frozen glass fingers,
I am the dreadful beast,
I am the snow storm,
Could you risk climbing me?

I am the dark destroyer,
My body can cause your destruction,
My warrior clouds around me are like hell,
But my icy fingers are having a meltdown,

I’ll let you have your day.

By Travis Yr6

3 comments:

  1. Travis, I think this poem is better than the BBC's. It is certainly more threatening. Good job.

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  2. Like the story Travis it describes the mountain well

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  3. good work trav better than bbc's version


    by Jamie

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