Mountain Poem
I am the rocky beast,
When you climb me my
body crumbles,
If you get to my
pointy head,
It will look like
you’re on top of the world.
I am the haunting
menace,
When my body moves I
make an avalanche,
My rocky arms crumble
when I move,
I have frozen glass
fingers,
I am the dreadful
beast,
I am the snow storm,
Could you risk
climbing me?
I am the dark destroyer,
My body can cause
your destruction,
My warrior clouds
around me are like hell,
But my icy fingers
are having a meltdown,
I’ll let you have
your day.
By Travis Yr6
Travis, I think this poem is better than the BBC's. It is certainly more threatening. Good job.
ReplyDeleteLike the story Travis it describes the mountain well
ReplyDeletegood work trav better than bbc's version
ReplyDeleteby Jamie