Thursday, 13 March 2014

Mountain Poem

I am the master from up high
Don’t look down you might die
I’m the killer that no one knows
I send the haunting chill down your back
When you walk on my ice it will crack.

I will summon armies of ice, wind and snow
The icicles like frozen fingers dangerously swinging down below
My eyes like an eagle will watch you wherever you go

I brought the destruction to you all with my avalanche of snow.

By James Yr6

6 comments:

  1. Nice story Jamie dodger! Love the don't look down you will die.

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  2. All of us in 6B13 March 2014 at 14:10

    James, this is such a good poem. I like the phrase haunting chill. Keep up the good writing.

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  3. awesome poem, James

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  4. that was really good James, I liked the haunting chill part

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  5. awesome!!! james

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  6. I like my poem

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