Rue lived a normal life. In the
middle of California she had perfectly tanned skin just like all of her
friends. One day she was down at the local sweet shop, Cindy Candy, and was
looking at the infinite gob stoppers and jellybeans in the heavenly place when
she noticed a sparkly silver box on the counter. Rue was puzzled. After all she
came here every day and had never noticed it. Curious, she asked Cindy what it
was. Cindy replied, “Find out for yourself.” Rue picked up the box and drew in
a deep breath. But then she lifted the lid. And there was silence.
By Alissa Yr6
Amazing story Alissa. I found it really scary when she opened the box and there is silence.:)
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ReplyDeleteAlissa, I liked the little bits of extra detail you add to the story, e.g. ...drew in a deep breath.
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