Friday, 14 March 2014

106 Words - The Horrifying Box

There was once a girl called Lilly (age 7). She had a really bad fear of clowns. Do you have a fear of anything? I do, clowns. On the twenty sixth of April 1974 Lilly found a mystery box sitting on her bed. You could just see all of the dust cascading down it and falling onto her bed. As Lilly got closer and closer her heart started beating ten times faster than normal. But when she lifted the lid…..clowns quickly popped up from everywhere, shouting, “Lilly look at us!” Lilly screamed in horror and then fell to the floor. The room started to spin rapidly.   

By Annabelle Yr6

4 comments:

  1. Brilliant. So many people are scared of clowns. There's something very unsettling about them.

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  2. Love your poem

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  3. Great descriptions, I love "cascading down" and "the room started to spin rapidly". Well done!

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  4. Oh by the way, I'm Rachael Harris, from team100!

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