There was
once a woman called Cinderella. She was a dirty old hag who worked for her
master, Mr Trollking. He was a very evil, powerful man and his three daughters
were no different. One day Cinderella went to the ball at the Carnegie. She
danced until twelve, and then her clothes magically disappeared! She was so
shocked that she ran away never to be seen again. But that’s not where it
ended. Then Prince Jack came looking for Cinderella. He was mad. Really mad. He
searched all day and night. Then he saw her, but she saw him first.
By Alissa Yr6
great story alissa
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Hi Alissa. I liked your story. I want to know this: why did the prince search for the old hag when there must have been other beautiful women there for him to admire?
ReplyDeleteBecause the prince was angry at the old hag so he wanted revenge
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Hi Alissa,
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I enjoyed reading your story.
You have certainly come up with a very different version of Cinderella to the one I know!
What happened next?
Mr Ball (Team 100WC)
Cinderela cast a magic spell onto the prince and forces him to work for her, but then someone came
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Awesome story Alissa. I like the way Cinderella is a dirty old hag. Keep writing!!!!! :)
ReplyDeleteKeep writing Alissa, yes I spelled your name right, great story
ReplyDeletereally good allysa loved reading it hope you will write a nother one and put it on cant wait to read your next one thankyou
ReplyDeleteI will keep on writing story's so please read them
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Nice story
ReplyDeleteBrill story Alissa carry on writing
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