Friday, 14 March 2014

Mountain!

I am the evil mountain.
The one that stands there like a monster.
I am the one that is surrounded by trees.
I am the one that hovers over you.

You will be sent to your knees.
When you go falling down down down
I am the one the sends you away.
Into the river you go.

The snow lays on me like a big thick coat.
Everyone is scared of me.
So run run run now.


By Hayley Yr 6

2 comments:

  1. Hayley, this is a brilliant use of repetition for effect. Down and run. Good job!

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  2. To Hayley brilliant poem
    From Annabelle.

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