One day there was a little girl, who was ten, named
Sarah. Her grandparents handed her a dark red box with a big question mark on.
She asked what it was. “It is the Box of All Eternity, now guard it with all of
your life,” said Gran. Sarah told her gran, “I have to go home now, sorry.”
Sarah took it back to her room - the tension was getting higher and higher.
So at age 35 Sarah went to the box. But when she lifted
the lid, disaster struck. All the lakes and oceans turned into burning acid and
the rain turned to lava droplets.
By Travis, Jamie and Aidan
I liked your story, especially the name of the box. So why is 35 the age you chose? Why did it take her so long to open it? Why did she not wait till she was 70 or 80?
ReplyDeleteit was just random and plus we didn't have enough space to fit all her life in to 106 words we will make a part 2 maybe.
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