In the darkness
of the night, the only sound that could be heard was the faint howl of a wolf,
miles away. Then the howl faded and after that there was silence in the wild
night. Just then, a tip toe sound echoed in the scariest distance – but why
would somebody come here this late at night? It just had to be that little girl
called Little Red Riding Hood – she was called that name because of the hood her
grandma had made her. Little Red Riding Hood went along the path and bumped
into a wolf. Then teeth snapped…
By Lauren Yr6
great story lauren love the ending !!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteHello Lauren. That's a good story x10. I liked the ending because it is just possible that it was Little Red Riding Hood's teeth that snapped. Did you intend to give the reader that option?
ReplyDeleteWell done, Lauren!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good new version of the story. You include some great details and have an accomplished writing style.
Keep up the good work!
Fantastic writing Lauren! I enjoyed reading your story. Lots of good descriptive words and an ending that makes me want to read part two to this story. I hope you continue writing on 100 word challenge and I certainly hope I'd be able to read more of your posts.
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Gayle (100 wc team)
awesome story Lauren I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing more fantastic stories!
ReplyDeleteThis is really good Lauren.
ReplyDeleteLeah
glad you liked it, leah
DeleteThis is great Lauren
ReplyDeleteMillie
Fantastic story Lauren, a gripping ending that makes you want to carry on reading. Well done!
ReplyDeletegood story Lauren, i liked the ending.
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