100 Words - The Haunted Mansion
Megan and I were walking home from school. Suddenly we heard a
strange scream coming from a big, old, white mansion across the road. We knew
something was wrong; we walked slowly and briefly to the mansion. “Who was
inside?” we thought. I was really scared. As we opened the crooked door we
heard a wicked laugh. “Look up! Can you see?” I shouted. We saw a bad sight. A
man; a man with a knife… there was blood on it. We backed away quietly. The man
charged. We screamed in horror. He shouted. We fell…gone! Nobody knew…
By Holly Yr6
Ooh, what a dramatic story. So are they speaking from the other side of the grave? I liked your use of short sentences for effect at the end.
ReplyDeleteAwesome! Very dramatic!
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