Friday, 21 September 2012

The Year 3s have been writing diary entries based on the Princess from the story The Princess and the White Bear King.

Dear Diary
Today I climbed a gigantic mountain. My hands were broken and I thought they were going to drop off. I could feel I was going to let go, but I didn’t let go. I finally got to the top of the mountain.
Love Princess Xxxxx


By Katie V (Yr3) 


Dear Diary
It was the worst day of my life. I was climbing a glass mountain it was freezing. I saw the sun shining behind the mountain. My hands and knees were bruised. When I got to the top it was voiceless. I saw an enormous grey castle in front of me.
Princess xx


By Simeon (Yr3) 

Dear Diary
Today was a scary day because I had to climb a freezing, chilly, sharp mountain. When I got half way I didn’t want to look up or down. So I just looked at the rest of the mountain and said to myself I can do this.  Eventually I got to the top. Then I saw the great grey castle and my heart started to beat faster and faster.                                       
Princess      xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
By Katie H (Yr3)

Dear Diary

Today I had to do the hardest task ever! I climbed a massive mountain. If you had seen it you would be amazed.  I could hear birds squawking. I was tired and my hands were bloody. I was nearly there soon I came across a grey castle it was very gloomy.  

Princess   xxx
By Jessica (Yr3)


Dear Diary
Today I climbed up a glass mountain and my hands were so so so freezing.  I felt anxious about climbing the mountain and what the weather would be like. After I got to the top I saw the gloomy grey castle. My hands were bloody and my legs were aching.
Princess xxx
By Evan (Yr3)


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