100 Words

It was a wonderful Saturday morning, when Max and his friend were going out on an adventure to the deep dark woods. Max’s dad was taking them there and dropping them off. When they got there it started to rain. “DAD, come back!” shouted Max but there was no luck. They found a tree with a large hole in so they made themselves comfortable. When all of a sudden a light flashed behind them so they went to see. “Drink this,” said a voice. “Look up! Can you see?” They answered yes and whoosh they went up into the sky. 

By Ethan W    Yr 6

100 Words - The Rollercoaster of Doom

The biggest roller coaster had just been built in the park. It was 50 metres tall and David was about to get 20 pounds to go on it. It went 100 mph. He had handed his money over, but what people didn’t know was that he was cursed for bad luck.

When he went on, the kart dropped from the 50 metres. Most broke their necks and some died. David survived the drop. He said, “Look up! Can you see the coaster track? It’s falling.” Sadly David died at the age of 14.  But now the curse was gone forever.

By Jamie Yr 6

100 Words - Hansel and Gretel

Once upon a time there was a little boy and girl called Hansel and Gretel. They lived with their mother and father in the deep, dark woods. One day Hansel overheard their mother talking.

“We need to think of something so our children do not starve to death, because we have no food at all for them to eat, or they will die very slowly.”

So Hansel woke up Gretel and grabbed her by the wrist and ran out of the house but when Gretel said:

“Look up! Can you see falling sweets?”

 they weren’t sweets, they were falling birds!

By Alyssa Yr6

100 Words - The Deep, Dark Woods

My name is Lily Rose.

It was a Thursday or maybe a Friday, it’s been so long. But that one day, everything changed. I had heard stories about the three bears; I wanted to know if it was true. I set off. Striding nervously, I came across a cottage crumbling from neglect. I heard crunching noises up above me; I turned back. From the other side of the woods came a voice, “Look up, can you see?”  I glared up at a tree to find a white snarl and a pair of eyes. “I’m sick of porridge.” It went black.

By Grace Yr6

Millie has been writing at home about what she does at the weekend:

On most Saturdays my brother and I go to Northside or Middlesbrough. We don’t just go there to look. We go to scramble bike race. We have won 4 medals on one of the bikes; also you get 20 minutes on the track. We have two bikes. Every Sunday we go and practise on the bike which has won 2 medals. We have had loads of people asking for my brother’s signature.  Also we go to Pica and take the bikes on the track and practise jumping over things.

By Millie  Yr6

100 Words - The Haunted Mansion

Megan and I were walking home from school. Suddenly we heard a strange scream coming from a big, old, white mansion across the road. We knew something was wrong; we walked slowly and briefly to the mansion. “Who was inside?” we thought. I was really scared. As we opened the crooked door we heard a wicked laugh. “Look up! Can you see?” I shouted. We saw a bad sight. A man; a man with a knife… there was blood on it. We backed away quietly. The man charged. We screamed in horror. He shouted. We fell…gone! Nobody knew…

By Holly Yr6 

100 Words - Mountain Story

It was the hottest day of the month. Jodie wanted to walk up a mountain; she had never walked up one in her life, also her grandma had just arrived and she thought it would be pleasant to have a family walk on a nice sunny day. So they suggested they would walk up Cat Bells. But then Jodie shouted, “Look up!  Can you see?” Everyone was astonished.  But what was the thing? It had red lights and a blue light on the top of it. “Run everyone!” It was a bad idea! What will happen…will they live or die?

By Millie Yr6

106  Word Story

Once there was a little boy. When he was one month old, his town was destroyed so his mum sent him to the mountains. There were 17 men waiting for his arrival. They trained him to fight, swim and to hide (really well).

As time passed he was given a cursed box,       but one fateful day he was given a message that his father (the king) had been murdered by his uncle. He sought revenge on his uncle, so he went to where he had hidden the box and found a girl opening it. He shouted “No!” …but when she lifted the lid… hell was unleashed.

By Keighley Yr6

106 Words - The Bin

Sarah has had a problem for two years with a bin. She thought there were monsters in there; today was her turn to put the rubbish out. She was terrified to do this but her mam said, “Go and put the rubbish out now!”  Sarah replied, “I can’t!”  Her mam forced her to go and do it.  Slowly Sarah opened the door and crept up to the bin.  She thought this was the end of her life. Sarah walked closer, then she heard thudding coming from the bin. She got even more scared. Her heart was pounding. “I am scared!” But when she lifted the lid… 

By Dan Yr6

106 Words - The Box…

A small, innocent box arrived at Bella’s door this morning. It must be a birthday gift, she thought, since it was her birthday. Grabbing the mysterious box Bella dashed upstairs into her bedroom. On the box it was labelled ‘Do NOT Open’.  But Bella did not listen. She went ahead and opened it! She was so excited but when she lifted the lid… Nothing. Suddenly in the blink of an eye she was gone! Sucked into another world… Never to be returned. No one knows why... She should have read the label. If you ever receive a box like this, I beg you, read the label.

By Ellie F  Yr 6