Friday, 8 March 2013

A 50 word story

A lonely moon hung in the midnight sky, barely lighting the ground below. Ben walked along the fog-frosted lane. A cold feeling occupied his body. He carried on. The air got closer but now it was stale and warm. He turned round. Death glared into his eyes. His heart stopped…     

By Grace (Yr6)

Friday, 1 March 2013


Alone
Nothing. Empty. Deserted. These words popped to mind when you saw the blank streets of London on that day, only one little person, Sophie scared out of her skin at the deathly silence. Usually the marketplace was bustling with life, everybody trying to get the best deals, but on that day, it was different, nobody was there…
Sophie heard the silent whimper of a child; she tried to find it but it kept moving further away.

“Hello…is anybody there?” shouted Sophie into thin air, she thought no-one would answer, or would they? Suddenly a hand grabbed Sophie’s arm.
”Yes, I am!” the male spoke boldly. A sharp gasp of breath was in taken by Sophie, she panicked. The tall dark figure towered above her. “You were easy to catch,” he said boldly.

The figure pulled out a recorder from his deep pocket; the whimper of the child, the one Sophie heard before, repeated several times on the machine.  She tried to escape from the clutches of the man behind her, but it was useless. All of a sudden, the figure’s phone rang.
“Yeah, I’ve got her. Come to the corner shop. Okay. Bye.”

Minutes later a van, uncontrollably, skidded around the corner, the back doors open, ready for Sophie to be thrown in. The man, who was now sweating, hauled Sophie into his arms and threw her into the back of the dusty van. Her arm gave a bone-crunching crack; she let out a piercing scream.
“Shut up,” a voice came from the front, but this one was unlike the voice of the bold man from before - this one was more of a sharp tone. Sophie sat in silence, not knowing what was around the corner for her…

It seemed like hours before the van grinded to a halt, Sophie was asleep, head between her knees.
“Out. NOW!” the voice pulled firmly at her arm, she tumbled to her feet and stood awkwardly in front of the broad man. This was not the man she had met first but, possibly, the man from the front of the large van. Sophie looked wearily around her.

“This is worse than London,” she mumbled to herself.
The terrain that she was in now was just a rocky road and a few mountains on the border of the remote area. She noticed more and more children being thrown out of other vans, each one with tears in their eyes, streaming down their cheeks and into the dirty sand below them.

Meanwhile back in London, more and more children were going missing, although no-one knew. Somehow Sophie knew this was the end, the end of her normal life… she dashed over to a small child about 4-5 years old to comfort them.
“It’s okay, you’ll be alright.” Sophie told the small child, trying to comfort herself as well.

The little boy looked up at Sophie, his sky blue eyes meeting her emerald green ones. Sophie thought the blonde haired boy could not speak, to her surprise he whispered the words, “Thank you” into her ear,
“We’re going to get out of here, trust me,” she replied…

After that, Sophie had a mission; a mission to get Troy, the boy with the beautiful sky blue eyes, home…to Liverpool; everyone said it was impossible, but Troy and Sophie didn’t. Each day they monitored the times that the men came into the cramped rooms and found the results were that they came in every five hours, which was, in their mind, enough time to escape from this prison. The next morning they were up bright and early, packing what little they had. Gingerly they stepped over the arms and legs of other people, being careful not to make a sound. As they reached a creaky door, so far their luck had been at the best point, was it about to end?  Fortunately the door, for once, did not creak; they took a deep sigh of relief. There was a rumble from the other side of the room, one of the twenty children in the room had rolled over and opened his eyes. Quickly Troy jumped on to Sophie’s back and they sprinted out the door towards the distant mountains.
The next few days were a mist of excitement and fear. Sophie noticed that Troy seemed to grow up a little; he started to act like Sophie in many ways, such as: he never had any fun anymore, he helped Sophie in hunting and fishing in the nearby river, and he would keep watch at night while Sophie slept.

Finally, after about two weeks, they found a small town close to Liverpool; they knew this because of a map in the town. Then she both remembered something, if there weren’t any adults in London, why were there adults here? They also remembered that they had no money to buy what they needed the most, food, so they started to stare in the direction of the bulging bins; they jogged over to the bins in hope that they could find some edible food.
Stuffing their faces with the delicious food that they found, they feasted on the chicken breast and two thick slices of white bread, but being careful to save enough for next time. Sophie picked upTroy, who was now asleep, and started to once again walk into the forest. About an hour later, Troy awoke from his sleep and quickly jumped up and sprinted further into the forest.

“SLOW DOWN!” Sophie shouted at him, “COME BACK!” she repeated.
Obediently Troy returned, “Sorry I had a dream that Liverpool was coming up and my mum was there, so I tried to see if it was there.” 

Then, just then, they heard the sound of several cars ahead. Sophie threw Troy onto her back and she quickly climbed a branch on a tree to see more clearly. Up ahead she spotted a city, “Could this be Liverpool?” she thought. Troy instinctively looked at her as if they were thinking the same thing. Carefully they climbed down the rugged tree, Sophie helping Troy, and ran towards the sound of the cars.
Eventually they got to an open road, just across the bridge was Liverpool; they finally got there. Sophie and Troy stood in awe, gazing at the bridge, inside of them was a cauldron full of excitement, relief and guilt (they were guilty because they left all those poor children in that awful prison) but they were here. Dashing quickly Sophie grabbed Troy’s hand and they ran over the bridge to safety, but would they be safe?

Suddenly trepidation set in, “What have we done? Why did we do that?! It was a ridiculous idea!” Sophie looked around her fearfully; like someone, or something, was watching her, but they were already over thirty miles, at least, from the prison. There was no turning back now. Walking deeper into Liverpool Troy noticed something out of the corner of his eye.
“Mum? MUM!” he shouted, he dashed towards her. The figure opened her arms and he jumped into them with such force that she toppled to the side. Meanwhile Sophie watched them closely; she knew that she would not have a family like that. Troy looked behind him and saw Sophie. He jumped out of his mother’s arms and ran towards her.

“You’ll always be family,” he whispered into her ear as he had done when he first met her. Then he ran over to his mother and asked quietly so Sophie could not hear, “Can Sophie be my sister? Please!”
“Of course darling,” she replied, her golden locks flowing over her shoulders as she bent down. While Troy told Sophie the news, their mother was about to burst with happiness. After that Sophie lived a blissful life in Liverpool with Troy and her mother, never to return to the awful prison or London again.

By Jayme (Yr6) -who wrote this at home

Tuesday, 26 February 2013

The Great Voyage

We are afloat on this endless sea of boredom
Slowly hunger comes upon us as the days float by
Our target has been the Galapagos Islands
But I don’t think we will ever make it

Soon after not realising it has been a few months
We approach the Galapagos Islands
Everybody hooting with joy
The enormous boat landed on the pale yellow sand 
With a little thud and rumble

We explored the island without haste
And found many peculiar new creatures
Such as the amazing giant tortoise
And land iguana
I studied the creatures carefully until my boat docked

I will always remember the great voyage on the H.M.S Beagle.


By Ellie and Kimberly (Year 6)   

Friday, 8 February 2013

The start of a story that Grace is writing:

Rihanna loved just sitting on the side of the quiet little cove. She adored sketching the picturesque landscape and much of the wildlife. One day whilst she was sketching, Rihanna noticed a ripple. Not the size a fish would make but slightly bigger. At first she just ignored it. But it seemed to hypnotise her, draw her in. Closer and closer she got until her head was underwater. In the murky depths she could just make out a giant fish. With red hair? And only half of it was a fish? Rihanna fell back.                                            
"A mermaid!" she murmured in astonishment. "It can't be!"
Rihanna ducked her head back under. She could see the tail but not the body. Where was it? Before she knew what was happening, Rihanna was dragged under. Down and down she went. Past the kelp forest, past the floating rocks. Rihanna’s lungs were fit to burst.
They were talking to her; telling her, "Breath, breath, breath!"
"Sweet air; give me, feed me sweet air!"
Her eyes were going to pop out of her skull. Rihanna breathed deeply…
By Grace (Yr6) 
A super piece of writing:

Finley felt the heat of the eye blinding streaks of sunlight. Liam, the head of the rugby team, strut right past with his head held high. Gripping the shimmering door handle of the rose red Lamborghini, he unbolted the rose door. The rest of the rugby team closely followed getting into the long lasting line of gilded golden Ferraris. Without a second look back he rammed his foot against the peddle and shot off down the filthy road. Stacey clung to her brother, Finley, as a tear went trickling down her face. His phone started to ring…

By Lucy (Yr6)

Friday, 1 February 2013

A 50 word story (and there's more to come).

Jacqui’s Mystery: part 1
Jacqui was on a walk to the park, but it was more of a graveyard. There was nobody around, not even an animal in  the trees. When she looked around she had company. But she didn’t find them familiar in any way. What was going to happen to her now? 

By Katie
More from Mr Darwin...
                                                                                                    November 1835
Dear Diary,

             I have been swimming in Coral Lagoon on the Coco Islands’ coast.  Tom and I (one of my crew members) swam half way around one of the islands. We encountered many species of fish, most of them new, but do not worry I have noted them. When I come home I will check them.   
 
By Grace (Yr6)

Friday, 25 January 2013

An update from Grace's diary...

                                                                                                            October 1835
Dear Diary,

             The tortoises were fascinating! We’ve seen about 6 Chelonoidis Nigra (giant tortoise) or Galápagos giant tortoises. That is all the different names for them. My latest discovery is the Galapagos finches. Although they are the same species of bird they have different beaks depending on which island they live on. For example one bird has a hook on the end of theirs to eat fruit. Whereas another one has a straight beak to eat insects. I must go now; it’s all hands on deck because we are in the midst of a terrible storm.     
 
By Grace (Yr6)   

Tuesday, 22 January 2013

We've been writing non-chronological reports on creatures that don't actually exist, but have, seemingly, adapted to their habitat.  We made it sound as convincing as possible.  This is Owen's: 

The Small Terror
Introduction
In the deserts of North Africa amongst the crinkly dunes there walks a creature that has adapted to the lands that no human can live in. It has learned to live, feed and breed. It has become one of the most wanted to see animals. But no one can find it. Have you seen or heard of this animal ?
Where it lives
Many people think that the Small Terror lives in holes or sleeps above the sand under the stars. But they’re wrong… it lives in bushes. People think that there are no bushes in the deserts, however 5% of North African deserts are covered in vegetation.
Eye sight
Like a lot of animals it can see brilliantly in the dark, much better that humans, but this creature has a unique ability, it can see its prey’s footsteps with ease in the dark. This animal hunts in the night and the day, but has a better chance of finding its prey in the pitch black. The nights in North Africa are like a black room, once it gets dark there is no way you can get out. It’s one of the best hunters in the dark. It can run as fast as a cheetah.
Body
This creature is not the biggest creature in the deserts, but it knows the desert like the back of it paw. It’s really hard to pick up because of its jagged scales. The weakness is underneath the scales (the belly), if the predator can’t peck at the belly it occasionally gives up.
Food
The Small Terror doesn’t eat worms or scorpions. It eats spiders and other animal eggs. The Small Terror’s claws can rip its prey in half.
 
By Owen (Yr6)

Friday, 18 January 2013

We've been reading What Mr Darwin Saw by Mick Manning and Brita Granstrom.  Here is a diary entry written by Darwin (in fact it's Grace, but you get the idea) when he was aboard HMS Beagle:
                                                                                                                                     
                                                                                                                   September 1835
Dear Diary,
                             I am now on the Galapagos Islands, one of the stops on my 5 year voyage. The men are just weighing anchor as I write. I have a theory and it is that man transformed slowly but eventually from Chimpanzee to human. Most people disagree with my view of the world because it rebels against what the church says, like God made Adam and Eve and we descended from them. Even if people still believe in Adam and Eve I hope at least someone will think twice about my way of thinking. Jack (my good friend) has just spotted a giant tortoise, a group of tortoises, on the shore heading into the main land. They say there are two types of tortoise with different shaped shells. I must go now to study them.      
 
By Grace (Yr6)
We're back!

This term the Year Sixes are learning about evolution and Charles Darwin.  Lucy wanted to write a poem about him.
  
Charles Darwin Evolution Poem

No one found a resolution
To the Earth’s evolution
But then came Charles Darwin
A brain box who loved farming.

He studied creatures as small as ants     
Also studied animals and plants
He decided to figure out how things evolve
Everyone thought it was impossible to solve
Charles Darwin was a hero
Who started off at zero.
By Lucy (Yr6)