Friday, 28 September 2012

I can still…

I can still hear the old townsfolk
The jet black columns of smoke.
I can still feel the pain
Tonight for dinner we’re the main.
I can still see the children in their dance
Now I’m staring into death’s glance.
I can still taste the sooty, crisp air
This war with Germany it’s not fair.
I can still smell fear
Now I’m afraid the end is near.
By Grace (Yr6)

2 comments:

  1. This is brilliant and it uses rhyme which is really hard to do.

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  2. I love it when is your next piece of writing coming out?!!!!!

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