This is Lucy's writing on Dunkirk.
Dunkirk
Sunrise. He saw the beach tattered, blown up, the shine
of the sun trying, just trying to reach the wrecked beach, blocked by the sandy
smoke. The surviving, the wounded, the worried and the calm. All huddled up
under the misty sky above, he dropped to his knees, the miserable claggy sand
seeping through the jagged holes in his army overalls.
Bringing one leg up then followed by the other, lifting
his weight, he dragged himself towards the desperate soldiers. ”Ah Private
Jones welcome to the force,“ shouted a war weary Captain. The Private walked away.
And never looked back. He stood watching soldiers die in agony, and others
laugh in pain.
Right there, right then a gunshot went off, the bullet
case fell onto the pack of sand like an empty grenade. He carefully studied the
bullets travel, then without warning a worrying noise, it sounded like something heavy hitting the
mucky sand. He looked up. It was. The silk, skinned horse hit the floor. The
horses started to panic.
As he collapsed to the ground thinking what’s the
point, he shaded his eyes from the smoke as he hid himself from the
devastating place. He lifted his hands away and just made out a figure in the
distant background, he traced it with his finger. It was a boat. The only thing
that crossed his mind at that very moment was I can go home! He started to
cry with joy.
Lucy (Yr6)
Lucy (Yr6)
Well Done LOVED IT!
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