Friday, 14 December 2012

Another dark 50 word story...

The End

As the plane came plummeting towards the Devil’s Pit, as awesome people call it, all you could hear was the pitch of unfortunates’ screaming. Amalia sat with her hand nervously slumped on top of her mother’s, trying to keep her calm and confident.  Amalia soothingly said, “This is the end!”
By Lucy (Yr6)
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4 comments:

  1. French person with a stripy top, onions, baguette22 January 2013 at 12:48

    Bonjour cava, cava bein, this writing is fantastique more more more.

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    1. French person with a stripy top, onions, baguette22 January 2013 at 12:51

      i agree french person

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    2. French person with a stripy top, onions, baguette22 January 2013 at 12:57

      i love this writing + I KNOW FRENCH PERSON etc.

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  2. Garlic mushrooms22 January 2013 at 13:00

    I more than agree.

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