Dear William,
My life before this war was so boring. I cannot believe that
the effect on Garmouth would be so epic. They’re scared. I know it, but with
the machine gun it’s a good way to take revenge. Before the war, mam was a worrier,
unlike me. And dad, well he was fussy, so he was quite particular in what he
did. Anyway I went to school and put up with BODSER BROWN. Weirdo. Come, come
to Garmouth. Be free to do what you like, you’ll like it. It’ll be heaven, pure
heaven. So come, you won’t regret it. It will be the time of your life.
The fact is you need friends that stay loyal to you. You
need a circle of friends so you can feel happier and safer. Cem’s my best
friend, his dad’s a grave digger, how cool is that, but when we put our minds together,
we’re unstoppable. You could be part of that, a trio, a triangle of minds.
Audrey’s a girl (yuck) she’s alright, but keeps us on our toes.
Another purpose is: with us you’ll have a bird’s-eye view of
the sea. And be the first to see the Germans. My friends and I need new
recruits, and we think you are just the ticket. Besides we need a soldier for
the army, some new meat to the bone, ‘cause every cloud has a silver lining but
yours well yours is gold. Look at it from my point of view, do you really want
to spend the rest of your life drawing insie winsie flowers? So decide.
Next, your friend Zach. Dead. I believe… I heard he was your
closest friend but you can’t stay sad forever, so come join us. You know you
want to. So believe me you’re wrong. So come. Please, you’re lost without me. We’ll
balance you out a bit, you’ll be in a gang, have friends. So I’ll say it again.
Decide.
We’ll train you, teach you how to use air-rifles. I can help
you! TRUST ME! And you, well, you could widen my knowledge, get me to be a star
pupil. In conclusion, you’ll have a bird’s eye view, you’ll be the ONE to see
the Nazis. I can’t promise a luxury 5 star hotel, but it won’t be far from it,
join me. Do you really want to die of
boredom?
Signed Chas McGill
P. S we need you, I need you.
By Jess (Yr6)
This is BRILLIANT!!! It really makes you feel like you are William. Keep up the Great Work!
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I will!!!
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