Friday, 12 October 2012

Workington Can Take It!    
Today, everyone is getting ready for this night, the big bombing. Everybody is anxious to get home and get ready before the attack. It’s rush hour for everyone. Air raid shelters are full of parents and kids. It’s manic.
 Here comes the siren. German engines roaring while they fly pass and then…. BOOOM!!! BOOOM!!! Everywhere people are sleeping in the shelters wondering, will we live? Or will we die? 
Another siren goes off but a friendly one. Workington is still standing and shakes the debris off its head, cleaning the bricks and the mud off the pavement and the road. Workington shall face another bombing…

By Ellis M (Yr6)
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  1. Jazz21 November 2012 at 20:42

    I like the way this writer has used questions to engage the reader. It drew me into the text. Great Writing!

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