Thursday, 4 October 2012


Sad on the Inside

As I look, I see fog.
The train just leaving out of the horrible station.
My heart pumping with excitement.
All I see is black like the night, people screaming - people smiling just like me.
On the inside I’m worried because my parents have gone.
When I am there, I am moving, eager to get off.
Sun shining bright in my eyes, “I’M OUT!”

“No tears” I say firmly as I wave a lonely goodbye to my friends
I am brave, I am strong, I walk
Then I’m outside my new house.
Doorbell ringing, blood pumping - should I run away?
He says hello and shows me the farm.
Hay stacks and my new dad teaching new facts.
Rain falls, phone calls and that’s me going to sleep.

By Jonathan D (Yr6)

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